acorns emerging
foretell days of
abundance
when shadows lengthen
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Photo by Charles Kinnaird
Note: Some haiku come quickly, and some come after rewrites. This week's haiku came after four previous attempts (and you can see from the picture, I started thinking about this one when the acorns were green). Here are the ones that came before. You can judge whether I settled on the right one:
acorns on the
branch
foretell days of
abundance
as sunlight
recedes
green branch
with acorns
foretells days
of abundance
when leaves are
falling
green branch
with acorns
foreshadowing
abundance
in days when
leaves fall
acorns emerging
foretell days of
abundance
as sunlight
recedes
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