acorns emerging
foretell days of abundance
when shadows lengthen
foretell days of abundance
when shadows lengthen
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Photo by Charles Kinnaird
Note: Some haiku come quickly, and some come after rewrites. This week's haiku came after four previous attempts (and you can see from the picture, I started thinking about this one when the acorns were green). Here are the ones that came before. You can judge whether I settled on the right one:
acorns on the
branch
foretell days of abundance
as sunlight recedes
green branch with acorns
foretells days of abundance
when leaves are falling
green branch with acorns
foreshadowing abundance
in days when leaves fall
acorns emerging
foretell days of abundance
as sunlight recedes
foretell days of abundance
as sunlight recedes
green branch with acorns
foretells days of abundance
when leaves are falling
green branch with acorns
foreshadowing abundance
in days when leaves fall
acorns emerging
foretell days of abundance
as sunlight recedes
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