green spruce
trees gracing
a golden
mountain meadow
beneath snowy
peaks
Image: Grand Tetons National Park, Wyoming
Artist: Tony Bennett (Antony Benedetto)*
green spruce
trees gracing
a golden
mountain meadow
beneath snowy
peaks
Image: Grand Tetons National Park, Wyoming
Artist: Tony Bennett (Antony Benedetto)*
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Photo by Derek Gee (The Buffalo News/AP)
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"Kamigamo Shrine is one of the oldest shrines in Kyoto and is located in a peaceful, quiet area."
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The nearest planetary nebula to Earth is the Helix Nebula,
which began expanding around 12,000 years ago. It’s roughly 700 light years
from our world…When a Sun-like star is dying, it doesn’t have the mass to go
supernova and so it throws off layers in huge coronal mass ejections (CMEs)
until it becomes a bright shell of expanding gas known as a white dwarf. The
shapes that the 1,000 or so cataloged nebulas form as the star ejects its
outer shell are as varied as snowflakes – a fact that NASA is struggling to
explain.
Earlier this year I read Clark Strand's beautiful book on
writing haiku, Seeds from a Birch Tree.
In one chapter he talks about how he kept a haiku diary. After 14 years of this
practice, he came home from his nature walk just having written his "first
haiku." With that experience, he destroyed all his previous work. I was
taken aback by that, but earlier this month, I had something of a similar
experience.
On my blog, I have been writing a haiku every week since
April 2013. Each Saturday with the “Saturday
Haiku” feature, a new haiku goes up. Haiku typically stand alone with no title. When I post my haiku on
my blog, because blog posts need a title, I will give the post a title. I will
also have a picture to accompany the haiku because of the nature of the
blogosphere and blog posts.
When my blog post, “Sparrow’s Feather” went
up on October 1, I realized that the picture did not
enhance the post, perhaps distracted from it. On Twitter, I posted just the
words and I was amazed at the number of retweets and comments. I then turned
around and posed just the words on Facebook and got a similar reaction.
Here are some
of the responses to the haiku:
I held my breath as I read this.
Exquisite.
Beautiful!
I can feel the stillness!
So lovely.
This may be my first haiku after nine years of attempts. I’m
not saying I'll destroy my previous work, but I will return to this one to try
to see what made it work.
Image: "Picking Apples: (2021)