Saturday Haiku: Sunset Calm

My high school algebra teacher used to say, "Show me your work." So today I decided to show you my work as I tried to come up with this week's haiku:

Li River resting

in Guilin’s ancient valley

with a sunset calm

with a sunset calm

the river valley resting

from the summer heat

sunset calm

river valley rests

summer settles

summer settles

as the river rests

in sunset calm

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Photo: Elephant Trunk Hill, Guilin, China



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